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Thursday 18 June 2020

Sinking Ship

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Length
Bronze medal = 3 paragraphs
Silver medal = 4 paragraphs 
Gold medal = 6 paragraphs 


Instructions:
Watch the video about the sinking of the titanic. You then need to create a person who was onboard the ship as it was sinking who manages to get safely to a life raft. You can use the list below to help guide your writing or completely create your own.
  1. The impact of hitting the iceberg 
  2. The first sign of water - what are you going to do?
  3. Getting to a life raft and into the water 
  4. Watching the ship sinking and beginning to go down


Plan your writing here:


Character: Who are you? Describe this person and their journey on the ship.

Problem: The Titanic is beginning to sink and you need to get to a life raft. How do you get there?

Solution: Getting to a life raft and safely into the ocean. What is happening?

Watching from afar: You begin to see the Titanic sinking. What does this look like? Feel like?


Start Writing below:


It was the First day on the titanic it was soo
cool but the one think i did not like the food
but the rest was good we were on our way to
the pool it took 5 minutes.when we Arrived i
was Excited but i had Just a before so I had
to wait a couple of minutes.after waiting i
hope in the pool after Swimming in the pool
for 2 hours i had to go i was sad that i had to
get out of the pool but my mum said i will
come back tomorrow I was really happy my
mum said we were going to eat i was happy
to 30 minutes later that was so good what
we had now i had to go for a Shower.after
having a Shower i was going for a sleep for
4 hours. 


After i Wake up i was soo Hungry but my
mum and dad said that we were going 
to eat soon my mum said to me to go
and get Change.after we all got Getting
some food after getting some food we
went back to our room.after we ate our
food  after eating i went for a sleep A
couple of hours later Khyani  Khyani
yes get up why Just hurry up ok ran
ran where is dad they are there ok.that
was good i know get on the boat ok.
omg look at the boat mum omg it is 
Sinking we are Lucky mum i know  
                                 

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